Persuasive writing

Your life is being destroyed because your not spending anytime with your family. So being famous is destroying your life!

being famous is annoying because you never get to spend time with your family. Just imagine your family eating dinner together without anyone crouding around you. You just don’t get to do that if you are famous.

So don’t be distorting your life your never home to put them to bed it’s absolutely absurd!

 

 

 

One thought on “Persuasive writing”

  1. Well done, Leila. You’ve started this piece well, but just need some more arguments to develop this argument further. What are some other reasons being famous might affect or impact your life in a negative way?

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